Why this Image Fails, and How I Would Fix it.

I spent 3 months completing a full 3d environment piece. I was really unhappy with the final results.
Check out my blog post on why I feel this way, and how I would fix it: https://dev-xyz.squarespace.com/blog/2017/10/15/why-this-image-fails

I want to start by saying, I am not writing this to get a bunch of “oh man, don't worry it looks fine!” comments. I am not looking for validation.
Its my opinion, that the ability to self critique is the main quality aspiring and junior artists are lacking. This is an attempt to practice what I preach, and to point out where I think this piece is lacking, how to make it better, as well as celebrate what went well.

Check it out .

Devon fay page 01

Sorry for the awkward preview. Still trying to figure out the best way to show the content from the blog post.
https://dev-xyz.squarespace.com/blog/2017/10/15/why-this-image-fails

Devon fay page 02

Sorry for the awkward preview. Still trying to figure out the best way to show the content from the blog post.
https://dev-xyz.squarespace.com/blog/2017/10/15/why-this-image-fails

Devon fay page 03

Sorry for the awkward preview. Still trying to figure out the best way to show the content from the blog post.
https://dev-xyz.squarespace.com/blog/2017/10/15/why-this-image-fails